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Circle to Love
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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Mornings fill me with precise dreams

Of romance morphing into love.

Everyday I hear the same song

Modified by different keys.

 

Dreams rehearse what minds require

Wearing out the path to loves needs.

Doors are opened and then slammed shut!

And tears a token of mistrust.

 

Salty cheeks, brush aside what could

Be; dreams that are reality

And not dramatic exercise.

 

Progress moves along the circle

To end where it always began—

With unfulfilled mourning, for dreams.

 

 

© 2008 Sara Coslett

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Circle to Love"
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 21, 2009
Dear Sara, I have not read a single line of yours in 6 years. Yet I still read the sadness as was a long time ago. As always everything is well written. I have a feeling you will be happy again.

GOD Bless
Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
I am drawn into the "mood" to which your verses have given birth, Sara. Truly compelling poetry. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 26, 2008

Your words take us in a sad circle, and we cry with you. This line is truly classic, "... unfulfilled mourning for dreams."
You continue to be so deeply capable in this mode. - Bill



Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 6, 2008
Excellent play on words and excellent write. I feel you futility. Keep on Keeping on. Liz

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 6, 2008
The last 5 lines reached out and spoke to me loudly. Come on, Char, expand those dream muscels! --Charlie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
Sara, a well-focused theme here and you write with accuracy and the required precision for this. I like it very much.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
Yearning and sadness predominate this heart touching write that leaves the reader pausing to reread again...

Fee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
"dreams that are reality
And not dramatic exercise"

indeed dreams of the heart, that are most meaningful to us, are those that eventually become real ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 5, 2008
well said

Reviewed on October 4, 2008
Sara,

That photo, and this write, is exquisite. Well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 4, 2008

Emotions not fulfilled in "Circle to Love", and grace blinks its light to another moment... Love is not accepted in pure essence... reasoning is the point... Doubt in loving flows.

Great composition of love and dreams.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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