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Thoughts of . . .
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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I miss the sound my thoughts make
when my words wrap around you.

Busy, like nice, is rushed without
being right – raising mediocrity
to the bosom of life.

In the days accounting of sacrifice
fitting neither here nor there
(in there)... thoughts die
at the height of respite.

Mustn't forget: Others come first.
Without their neediness,
I might be naught(y).


© 2009 Sara Coslett

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 Reviews of "Thoughts of . . ."
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
Those first two lines blew me away. I wish I'd thought of them.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Awh...be naughty. Delightful poem. Liz

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Sara, the first two lines grabbed me and wouldn't let go.
Indeed, I like all the lines you write.
In conclusion, naughty is nice.
-gene.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Hey, Sara, you've unravelled a mystery for me, and I'm grateful.
This is a great piece of writing! - Bill;

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
there's a great gap between being naught and naughty ... i think you've explored it quite well ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
I appreciate what you express within your verses, Sara; as well, your unique style. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
Sara,
Depth in your reflections and I love the point of view expressed, a unique take.
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
Coming full circle in this beauty of rich wonder and soul. "Raising mediocrity" offering hope for future endeavors...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
I love the first stanza...It wraps around my brain and wants to take root there.

Cryssa

Reviewed on March 27, 2009
Few words - much impact in thought provoking lines - well done, Sara, nice reading you again!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
there is a lot encompassed in this little write-i enjoyed it


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