Breathe in, breathe out
Smile, try not to pout
Walk tall and proud
But keep your head out of the clouds
Recognize the good from the bad
Be weary of it and you’ll never be had
Embrace the good when you see it
So that you can love, as love permits
Be nice to those who aren’t
Divide your time into compartments
Always leave a chunk of space for fun
Even if it’s just a walk out in the sun
Attune your solar plexus as you go
And let all of life’s goodness flow
Focus on the positives
Acquaint yourself with your negatives
Try to keep them under control
Don’t ever let them rule your soul
~ ~ ~
I Bid You Peace
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Reviews of "A Reflecting Pool"
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
I found the purely biological reference to the solar plexus in stark contrast to your mention of soul at the end. ah, well I guess that's the modern human condition rearing it's ugly -and - beautiful - at - the - same-time head.
Focus on the positives,
acquaint yourself with your negatives.
I love that sentence!
Great poem again.
Love. S.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
SUPERWRITE full of truthful SUPER POSITIVE WISDOM!!!!
I bid SUPER PEACE to you!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
A good place to be, Super. Excellent advice and advice to live by.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
Wow! now this is my kind of poem. Positive is the only way. Sure there is negative, but I don't have to dwell on it. I will have to read you more often too. Have a great day!
when we harbor a positive attitude we attract positive events to us... by feeling negative or allowing the negativity of others to influence us, either astrally or emotionally, we set our souls on a course of misfortunate consequence... excellent write!
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Your ripples of wisdom in life's pond are very well made. Your words ebb and flow with confidence. J.
this should be on a wall plaque!!!
acquaint yourself with your negatives.
I love that sentence!
Great poem again.
Love. S.
I bid SUPER PEACE to you!
~Nikki~
~Joseph
Chrissie
Mostly...hehehe.....me and you....and You!!
Love
Tinka
Smoooooooooooooch!!...on the nose!!