Inside a heart carved out of a granite mountainside
Stands a fortress to the expression of love
Whose force intensifies under the burden of immense consequence
It resides where dreams are built like celestial castles in the skies
Flying through clouds of billowing sweet kisses
And the spell of the magic potion called love
Spins an intricate golden spider web
Clinging to its sides is the music of kindness
Strumming a deliberate beat of attraction
You are thinking “I never knew this could be love”
And you soar higher reaching deeper and deeper into unknown caverns
Where lust and love know no bounds
You are one hundred feet tall
And the world becomes your oyster
Salacious pixie dust sparkles in the light of night
Dripping juices of luscious spirits
Ultimately singing loves melodiously sad song
Of two hearts carved out of one love
Shared, then dared
Then died
Excellent....do you need your temperature taken....lol....for you it will be....not a daffodil....but....hmmm.... a
carnation....heheheheh....a pink one!!!
Just joking....too much oyster can make you feverishhhhhhh!!
Salacious pixie dust sparkles in the light of night
"Dripping juices of luscious spirits
Ultimately singing loves melodiously sad song" great lines... excellent write!
One of your best writes! exquisite expression sad finale!but as they say better to have~~~;-)
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Wonderful. I love the pic you painted with those words. I can almost see the sparkles of the night myself. Well done. Love. S.
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
A triumph as far as monuments to love go. I think when there is romantic love love is a sort of over-riding theme. We find love where we thought only the banal or downright mean existed. Anyway I share your view of love. It is meant to over-power. And the liberty of mind we lose is not much missed.
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A stunning piece. Wonderful imagery..
~Chrissie
carnation....heheheheh....a pink one!!!
Just joking....too much oyster can make you feverishhhhhhh!!
Love
Tinka...CU
"Dripping juices of luscious spirits
Ultimately singing loves melodiously sad song" great lines... excellent write!
Reindeer
Adam