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Drowning in Reality
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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So much confusion surrounding me
Making me wonder can I really see?
Why is truth draped in insanity?
Why do lies spill across my veins with profanity?

Am I now realizing loneliness is playing its ugly game?
Turning a phrase into a ball of flame
Igniting life into a whirlwind of fire
Not knowing that rules are always required

There they are so busy condemning themselves to a life of no change
When they are the ones who are deranged
Such sad souls living a life of dread
Always reinventing the realm of honesty instead

So here I am hoping to fix everything
Wishing I could set all the lost ones free
Dreaming they'll find the best in life that could be
Before they drown in reality
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Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Good poem on a good topic Sara but the scansion goes astray at times. I'll make a copy and you can get some of that advice on technique you tell me off for offering free ;)~ (but only to friends)
Ian
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
a great write..Floreann
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Well penned, can feel the strong emotion.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Nicely written!


Tony:)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
life's a bitch and then you die <---Hate that saying really!

Enjoyed the rhyme Sara.....good to read you once more....thanks, Dani ;)
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Reality is usually very lonely and dark. A place where I do my best to stay away from. Good write SG....~SH~
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
very beautiful write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Yes Sara drowning in reality...but thank goodness I can still swim...but I need a lifejacket...do you have a spare one for me??

Okay!! Do take care my friend..!!

Thanks for the shoulder to cry on!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Lonely is a sad word, reality is a promise.
Excellent write........
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Excellant penning of expression and feeling in this one...I LOVE IT!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Nicely done, enjoyed every word, bravo.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
I'm here, but could you turn on the damn lights' it's dark in this here den!
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
A beautiful Write
excellent

William
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