Love (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

This is about as clear as can be, even with the dark clouds. I hope reality can see this. peace

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Lovely haiku, Sara. I love the image in this ...for the rain washes away what is and what was and leaves behind reality and truth.
Amor

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

This guy picked a good name for himself. Your poem is perfect!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Great one!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Sara.. Yikes! It isn't often that the comments keep me pondering longer than the poem itself! You ok? The haiku is FAB! a world of thought in a few syllables and said with conviction, as you are so good at. Change nothing! (unless you wish to).. great read, Sara. love, katy xox. p.s. seriously: you ok?

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

I'll change the title as it has completed its purpose for me, but I will not change the last line. I don't care how you feel about me anymore. This is about my love for you. So bite me.

Reviewed by Jim Beam (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

reidit the name of the poem and the last line and i will accept it. please call me Av Blackdick. AssVuck Blackdick. AD, you'll have to try a lot harder than that! these monkies here at http://www.authorsden.com/categories/cat.asp?catID=56 are allowed to make their rubbish public, but i am not..., the illuminutti just never stops following one, ey?

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Perfect... depth in few words

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Wise decision.
Probably the best you can do right now.
Short but strong.
Nico

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

SUperb Haiku!!!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

That's a nice thought, just hope it doesn't rain.