Setting Sail, My Life (Sonnet) (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 26, 2003

Hoist up the mainsail, and make away, 90 knot winds approach, grey sky's, ten foot swell, tack and gybe, but.... The Island is in sight, land ahoy!!
I love sailing, Sober!! Mor fell out of bed, on his head, and couldnt get up in the morning, so he swabbed the deck, slipped on his neck
and now he's in the crows nest raving :)

This too will pass
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Fantastic, Sara! Raise that banner.. lift those spirits.. make way for this newly unencumbered word wizard! This is not just a marvelous poem.. it's an anthem! Long may your heart's sails carry you. Jaysus, I feel a march coming on! C'mon, sweetie.. let's boogie! I just love this one, Sara.. katy xox.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Wonderfully crafted and expressed. Thank you for sharing this offering, Sara. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Setting sails for new worlds out there, just waiting to be discovered. It is time for a challenge.
Let your time away inspire you into which direction to sail first.
Nico

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Like a furled craft a vision set sail.
Realizing at long last I did not need you or he.

..indeed..the minute we realize that truth.we are FREE!!
Thankyou..perfect write..hmmm..can't see myself writing a sonnet..hate rules..sonnet has too many!!
Brilliant write!!!
Vesna

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Woooooohooooooooo Sara......kick a$$ write.....I'm lovin' that rhyme ;)

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Sara: This is quite beautiful and a wonderful sonnet. I hope to learn how to write a sonnet someday. I've just recently read an article written by Justin D'Souza on the rules for writing sonnets. I'm going to have to read it several more times, however, to get the rules down pat. Thanks for sharing this and you've done a superb job.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

'Charting a course, I alone set me free.'

Good for you, Sara! May your course take you to wondrous new places.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Very well written piece Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Well Sara I never!
Your certainly learning girl, down them on the last punch.
If one were to read between the lines, there is sad days ahead for the blue tablet brigade unless they are already inured.
Big Smile.
Mor,
Ps Do not forget to ask the Captain to put the stabilisers out, just in case all the other passengers fall out of the Bunking beds (Freudian slip)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

When we finally realize that which your have so eloquently written it lifts a cumbersome burden from our hearts. Well done.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Sara, sometimes we have to tidy up our life's desk. Ofcourse most of the time when I try that I throw away things I should have kept. Good write Sara. Lisa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

enjoyed reading this very interesting poem...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

an excellent write My friend ...Sara
enjoyed

William