Inside the gate the smell of strong tea in the air
With burnt toast and real butter
Outside the gate, strong cinnamon and nutmeg.
But I preferred the neighbors who
Cooked rice, plantain and pepper sauce
And the other that made me nauseous at times,
Fried curry rice and herbs.
But I could stand the garlic
And onions from the other side
As I wondered how many bags of onion could smell that strong.
The dawn came each morning and the sun was never late
With the dew drops on the grass
And those insects who have ventured into the light
Now lying helpless on the ground,
Struggling to recapture their lost flight
Before the crows and other birds
Make a feast of them.
Dedicated to the memory of my mother ..1914--2002
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Reviews of "Memory Of Home..part 1"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Magnificant write there no place like home or the memories of home
palpable ... reminded me of a large brownstone apt. complex in the city, where every hallway held the scents, the likes of what you describe above, a little bit of history unknown to you, but familiar ... like this piece ... the exact nature of your memories are unknown to me ... and yet your words have made them familiar. excellent write and tribute to your mother. -a
the imagery...the wonderful(not-so-wonderful *smile) scents in the air...beautifuly written piece
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
Oh, how closely tied to our senses are our deepest felt memories. We are such suggestable creatures and your weaving of words with thoughts has truly honored your mom forever. just wonderful! katy.
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