Rose! Proud be not (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wow. I like the classic touch to this. I think you have a winner here. Saving this. Hard hitting piece.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

OOOF! A gut-punch, right in the solar plexus! What a daringly original statement!

Awesome, concise, even stark, very well-executed write, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

ALL are pure..and all are pain..briliant insiteful write Bhuwan

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

Really powerful! Bravo!

Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

It's wonderful; it's real; it's beautiful.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Powerful ending...
Superb write...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

great write my friend
whether or not you love the rose
this write
is excellent

William

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Roses represent a two fold thing, Beauty, and pain. Nothing that is good and beautiful in this life, comes without a price, that is why it is associated with, the deity!

Ch'erie

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

wow...this is good! A bit of a change in style but you made it work effortlessly.
Excellent job, Bhuwan

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Wow Bhuwan, powerful observation, excellently expressed, as always!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Bhuwan your keen perception allows you
to write honest and superb poetry!Bravo!

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Ha ha, interesting pontification here. I'll need to think about this one.

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

You succeed at the hardest task of a poet--making others see from a new perspective--challenging preconception. Great job.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

I am speechless!!

Masterpiece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

coming from a former whore, I'd thank you for this!
This belies description. You seem to tap into the universal impetus in your work!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Bhuwan this is splendid...I just love
the insight here...great writing...
floria

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

i like how you see the beauty in everything ... a most enlightened perspective ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Very interesting poem, Bhuwan. Enjoyed immensely.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Bhuwan, this is excellent work. The type of poem that one wishes they had written. Very masterful.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

This is one of the best poems I have ever read in this den.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Masterful poem, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Wow! Bhuwan you sure know how to clear blurred images. Great write once again! Lisa