And we may be lost and floundering, but are gathered and nurtured again by the fathomless depths of your beautiful wisdom, based on the truths of unconditional love. You are truly a rich man in that sense for, the more you give it away, the more it returns to you a hundred-fold. May this love be your fortress, and your strong shield and protector always. LOL Kate xx
this is truly exceptional and i think it reflects all our feelings about poetry in those last lines, but the preceding ones are so well thought out and precise, i am really impressed
Bhuwan as true a masterpiece as I have ever seen.
It makes me so proud to know you, and your fathomless
heart! Your wisdom shines in this one, a beacon of light!
thank you for sharing such a powerfully moving piece of poetry. this is just STUNNING!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm sitting here, breathless, with tears in my eyes--o, you've touched me today...thank you
The deepest love one has for the word is with you always my friend. Very wise and fruitful write.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Bhuwan, this is one of the best pieces of poetry I’ve ever had the pleasure to read. Just absolutely brilliant work, my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
again great write
Tommy
A most definitive and pulsating write - a versed masterpiece!!
Robert
WEll done Bhuwan.
Quite speechless actually :)
Ch'erie
"My Soul
once asked me,
“What have you got
by all your poetry?”
“I’d lost myself
but the poetry
found me,”
was my reply."
Bhuwan, your Soul shines. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
It makes me so proud to know you, and your fathomless
heart! Your wisdom shines in this one, a beacon of light!
thank you for sharing such a powerfully moving piece of poetry. this is just STUNNING!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm sitting here, breathless, with tears in my eyes--o, you've touched me today...thank you
one of your best--BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reindeer
Thanks for the gift of a smile ;-).
"My Soul
once asked me,
“What have you got
by all your poetry?”
“I’d lost myself
but the poetry
found me,”
This is me!!
Love Tinka
The deepest love one has for the word is with you always my friend. Very wise and fruitful write.
Carmen :-)