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Another hand
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Strapped to a stretcher,

she is breathing in a stained tiny room.

 

A faceless doctor heaves a scalpel to the light,

he slides his hand around the back of her neck

inches the hand closer, and gasping, heart pounding,

she gathers all the energy, muscles pumped to jump

out of the stretcher.

 

With virgin tears all over her eyes,

she gave up the fight.

 

Then the end slowly entrapped her,

enwrapped her, and ultimately enticed her.

 

She’s cured of all kinds of ailments.

 

Came another hand, out of nowhere.

 

Another hand,

she gave her hand to the lifeless hand.

 

 

Copyright 2008 Bhuwan Thapaliya

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Another hand"
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
I feel the death of love is the birth of loves freedom for in this poetic expression life is the death of love, just as death is the breadth of loves life, one cannot be without the other
very depth percieving write poet
Much Love & Inspirations
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced`Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Interesting write, Bhuwan. Makes one think. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Nice work...you capture well this view of an ending and a beginning of life...sad and yet joy becomes the finality...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
Great write My Friend Bhuwan
As always an outstanding write
You still have that poetic magical touh
Called a Golden Pen
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
This is a good poem,I enjoy reading it

Edwin


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