I Will Terminate This Life (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Oh yes...we all have those days...

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

There is beauty in the words sadly expressed but there is also beauty in life if it is given time to find you.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

The sadness in this poem is so deep, so very painful to read, I pray you stay and fight on, beautifully sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Makes the wheels of the mind turn gr8t

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

I just hope this is only a poem and you don't mean it the way you wrote it????
Love your photo!
Nico

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Excellent word play, Bhuwan. Very profound. Now think about the opposite: if all were certain and there were no uncertainties. Wouldn't that be a bit boring? One might well take the opportunity to end that nightmare.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Bhuwan, don't be hasty...... I really do love your words.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Your usual brilliant write, I know you know that the main frustration of life is the wait for the next one to begin, but it isn't fair to hasten its beginning;-)

Reviewed by a- maryllis

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Wow! I like this... awesome stuff

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

outstanding write..Floreann

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Very profound reflections this perfect piece motivates, dear friend.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

{{{BHUWAN}}}}}
This is very thought provoking sweet friend..
Makes the reader stop in their tracks and reverses throught it again and again.....
I like to thin k you are taking charge of you... In this one.
Bravo clap my sweet friend.
Love n Luck Peggy
{ps watch your email will send info music}

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

A real play...on words.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Bhuwan, excellent verse. Love your play on words.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Profound, and Brilliant!
Kudos!

tony

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Very expresive...very well done...bravo.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Very deep write Bhuwan!!

You made me think deep for a while...and I read it again an again!!

And I liked it..thank you for sharing!!

Warm Love Tinka

Beautiful Picture of you!!

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Uncertainty may be a discombobulated dagger, but understanding is not a prerequisite of purpose unless of course we think that we are in sole charge of our destiny... An individual of faith has some yearning toward the fulfillment of something more, like a swelling seed - THIS is compressed certainty! Mere mortals plant seeds, but something much bigger than us make it grow.

Bhuwan, this is a thought-provoking write from a Man who has much to give... Thank you.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

Whew - I had to read this one a couple times, Bhuwan. Wowwee... excellent! Bravo!

Tami