Beautiful work Ch'erie! You are a grand poet with vibrant images that come to life,and it's good to read you again. Hope you stick around awhile;-)You've been missed!
Delightfully unique, Ch'erie, and you manage very adroitly to weave in the magic that this water has for you into your words. It is a scintillating write which sparkles with life, mystery and expectation. Very light, very lively. As Susan says, this lives! Thank you for the oxygenating I need this afternoon! :)) LOL Kate xx
Ch'erie
You superimpose such great spiritual depth and emotion to this deeply
intense write, that carries the reader along in the surging force of the River..
Thanks for sharing
Love and Peace
Peter
Breath taking write that carried me floating along as if on a cloudy raft through each verse to it's final conclusion. You weave reality and fantasy in this one into a wonderful poetic experience Cherry Pie, well done.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
Brillo imagery here, it really does flow!
eT
Paul;-)
Chanti
I really enjoyed this construct! Very creative!
Many blessings
Richard
Thank you!
Susan
You superimpose such great spiritual depth and emotion to this deeply
intense write, that carries the reader along in the surging force of the River..
Thanks for sharing
Love and Peace
Peter
Best wishes
from
kay.
Fee