Like a liberated bat
they ascend to the skies
above and beyond
blue hue's and dye's
Taking away all that is dear
Rolls Royce lifts off the tarmac
you sit watching in awe
then retreat to you're own shack
She'd come a long way
in a powerful bird
eighty three in the shade
some would think it absurd
Toting a stick
arthritis for good measure
replaced hip and diabetes
what an extraordinary treasure
Two weeks in the heat
of a foreign burnt land
knocking her bandy
yet she walked still as grand
A journey of love
not a sightseeing tour
buildings nor parklands
of this lady did lure
Her purpose fulfilled
just in spending time
with the family and kids
she thought so sublime
Then as quick as she'd come
thus quickly did leave
leaving behind empty spaces
and a heart so bereaved
Though all felt an emptiness
she said this to me plain
"Dont be sad that I'm Leaving
Just be glad that I came"
Ch'erie de Perrott
Copyright 2006
Thank you for sharing with us
Your most heartfelt write!
YOur Grandma is a ONE OF a Kind Treasure
I would adore
YOur ending was perfect to the - T -
YOu have memories that will last you Forever!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
enjoyed this much
and what wonderful things I'm sure the two of you shared
wonderful great memories!!!
God Bless
Lots of love
Lena
Eileen
"Don't be sad that I'm leaving, just be glad that I came!"
This is unique, and well constructed tribute.
I enjoyed its narrative qualities, it's as if one actually met
Aunty. It is wonderful that our love for family members can inspire lovely writes such as this one you have penned!
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
And you must be one too for her to want to travel to see you.
Blessings,
Elizabeth
Great tribute Ch'erie!!
Love tinka
xo Taylor
Fee