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Love & Marriage.
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Marriage and relationships at times are like a roller-coaster ride, as there are twists and turns and many up and downs.

It is not always a bed of roses or a love fest and there might be times that your love faces the ultimate test.

One must walk away even though you did give it your all.

While the other is now picking up the pieces to their broken heart as you had to part.

But in time will make a new start.

However second time around may be the charm as your life now becomes a merry-go-round.

Although there are never guarantees, but if you care and share and work together side-by-side love may survive.

Or it’s another roller-coaster ride.

 

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 Reviews of "Love & Marriage."
Reviewed by Philip Sylva
Reviewed on May 3, 2012
Love, relationships and marriages are no dreams or phantasm. They are real life situations which can turn ones life for better or for worse. The ups and downs are part of every life situation, the problem is how to sail past them without breaking ones heart. Picking up the pieces of a broken heart is the worst part of a broken marriage. But then, loving and caressing for each other, working together side by side is the solution for a better marriage. Well said Laura!
Your poem is educationally informative.
Gomez

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 18, 2012
Although there are never guarantees, but if you care and share and work together side-by-side love may survive.

Let us hope so, Laura. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
HOPEFULLY ONE LEARNS FROM PAST MISTAKES AND TAKING A 'CHANCE' IS A STEP OF FAITH...ONE NEVER KNOWS. BUT, WHEN THEY RELY ON GOD TO LEAD THE WAY AND GO WITH THEM DAY BY DAY THEN LOVE AND MARRIAGE...WORKS! WELL DONE, LAURA...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
A great poem that - Hits home!

God Bless You!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
"Although there are never guarantees.."
and that's the challenge of it, Laura,
and yet we find the will (the need and want)
to try again; i admire your spirit and strength.

John

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
Ride, ride the storms, but
let the thrills be yours as
You have held on tight with
all Your Might!! *Laura*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
second time around may be the charm

How so very true, and I'm very grateful that it was for me.


Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
So insightful. Hate those roller coaster rides. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Yes we all can fight love or strive to make it better but it takes two if it is to succeed.
fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Laura, my mind is in a whirlwind, as your words speak truth...so many broken rides, if only they could all withstand the downs that go with the ups :)
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Sadly I understand the picking up the pieces of a shattered heart. Not mine, Nanette's. I've forgiven myself for all my faults, but not that.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Marriage is really hard work. Young people think that it's sex and good times, but those that stick it out, to stay within the marriage through the good and bad times is hard work... But in time the couple begins to know each other and do less of what makes the other unhappy and more of what makes the other happy, but sometimes it is hard work.
Mark

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Really nice motion in your poem through the carnival imagery, and wise is your clear eyed look at the whole picture ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Much wisdom in your words, Laura....it takes "two"...additionally, the second time around is awesome!

Anna


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