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Wise Sages Search
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Wise Sages Search Golden was the calf Just appearing out of the fire Beautifully bright and laughing Moses crashed and burned. Straight was the stake Loudly Luther lit the wood Fire and heretic blend as one Menno Simons turns and runs. Lost was the key Dropped deep between her breasts Wise sages daringly search St. Teresa of Avila feels a smile. Red was the blood Little kid from Nazareth shivered Zealot’s blade by the side of the road John played with Salome’s “heart.” © 2010 Dayvid Graybill Golden was the calf Just appearing out of the fire Beautifully bright and laughing Moses crashed and burned. Straight was the stake Loudly Luther lit the wood Fire and heretic blend as one Menno Simons turns and runs. Lost was the key Dropped deep between her breasts Wise sages daringly search St. Teresa of Avila feels a smile. Red was the blood Little kid from Nazareth shivered Zealot’s blade by the side of the road John played with Salome’s “heart.” © 2010 Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

A laughing calf fondue of amusement followed by lust and murder. Just another day in Dayvid's den. I Liked. Patrick

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

You shouldn't peep on Sage & I Dayvid... ;)
Red is the blood of passion
burning deeply...your words brand my thoughts

Gold Charms & Udder Balm
Vickie

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 27, 2010

Repetition finds Wise Sages Search with the message worth reading twice, Dayvid...blend of religious spiritual mix, we all have different faiths we follow and spiritual paths lit by different woods on the bonfire...good to see you at the gathering, Pastor...wine's in the silver chalice, drink with me...

Love and ankh's brand on cedarwood, pagan's match strikes hot,
Sage

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Hmmm? Why is this posted twice? It isn't THAT good!

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

This is put in a most intriguing fashion; I can make out some of the events you speak of, but not all. Your creative point is sharp as all get out, Dayvid; this one rocks well. Thanks for sharing this one.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Your poetry is so unique and well penned Dayvid.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

This was a very superb piece of poetry, Dayvid..I could see it all unfolding in front of my eyes..
Good stuff!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Excellent piece. So vivid and true-to-life.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on July 26, 2010

Outstanding piece of writing.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY