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Sad Sam
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Sad Sam

 

It rained last night cleaning out

the trash by the side of the road

 

We went to visit Sam

and she didn’t get out of bed

Sadness hung on the walls of her room

Silently screaming “Go away”

 

We wished for feeling

We wished we could see

But nothing broke through

And it keeps following, following, following me

 

The drummer keeps time

As well as he can

But the bass is outa tune

And the guitar holds a note for Sam

 

Can she look at the pain

Is there another way to go

Her father, her father, her father

Was he ever so cruel

 

Sam said she heard the rain

It made her felt good inside

It cleaned out the trash

But it left her in pain

 

Dayvid Graybill

© 2005

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sad Sam"
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
the photo looks so brutal Dayvid
and your words unfold her pain
the depth so wonderfully expressed

Soothing Mud & Puddles to Splash
Vickie

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Beautiful real life poem and heartfelt Dear Dayvid!!
Thank You for sharing!!
Love and Gratitude,
Suzie xoxox :-D

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
So very sad dear man well done indeed..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed on August 31, 2010
sad well versed Dayvid, cheers

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Wow, what an incredibly sad story, well told.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Ouch! This is very moving. My heart goes out to Sam.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Powerfully sad, my friend.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Powerful, deep and so, so sad.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Dayvid, the pain of lost childhood stays with someone for a very long time...This is so sad, it makes me cry.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Solemn, tightly woven words ~
Your poem, Dayvid, is magnificent!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Deep one, Dayvid. Nicely done.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Sadness just keeps on and on. Chronic depression which you so expertly described, comes horrific events during young childhood. Excellent piece, Dayvid.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Another compelling and soul-reaching write, Dayvid. Well done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
Hurt and pain is never forgotten, it just sits in the back corner to come out and haunt us another day. A great write Dayvid.

Newfie Hugs, Rose


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