Gene, another great little ditty my friend -- I think Slyman and Shoester had better beware -- all misspellings are purely intentional -- you are a clever lyricist -- in my part of the country, the pine trees just groan -- we have old pines here -- I can hear the music to a Vanessa Williams' song playing in the background -- I don't remember the title -- the words go something like, "sometimes the sun goes round the moon" -- please, never stop writing for us -- much peace and love to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2009
Love the line: "the pine trees sigh" ~ I imagine a cool breeze rustling branches and setting wafts of fragrance through the air. I enjoyed how light and airy this poem is.
Yes! I accept...Be mine, Too...Now let's crack open this bottle of 20-year-old Scotch I brought you, Gene My Valentine, and let's get a red buzz...write some poetry and then visit Keats in our liquid dreams...Happy Valentines Day, Williamson...
I would be happy to be your Valentine today. Thanks for the kind offer. Know you will get many requests to be yours today. You are such a kind caring man, who could resist being your Valentine today.
I see all your frends are wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day and I do so along with them all. Take care my friend. And hoping I'll hear from you soon again.
Oh Yes, I will...I truly will
If you only knew how you fill the bill
Handsome and sexy, and oh so strong
If I said no, I'd be in the wrong
I wish you were near so I could send a hug
but then I'd be afraid you'd get my flu-bug!
Happy Valentine's Day cutie .... and from the looks of all the "yes's" you sure did end up with a handful of Valentines... We gals sure know a good thing when we see it... hugs, lindalaw
...lookie over here Gene....YES take a peek....see me pull back on my romantic heart shaped bow & release my arrows heart filled with passionate valentine love aimed towards you....(bulls-eye!)
Yes I Will...Now Will You
(oh, I forgot you have to I filled the arrows heart with my special love potion just4U!!
Love & Hugzz
Happy Valentine's Day!
Vickie :)
Newfie hugs, Rose
Edwin
and i can make my heart into a bracelet for you :}
> <
ness
Sage
I see all your frends are wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day and I do so along with them all. Take care my friend. And hoping I'll hear from you soon again.
Carole~
Light and airy and whimsical as faery dust, perfect for the occasion and day that's in it. A delight.
John
If you only knew how you fill the bill
Handsome and sexy, and oh so strong
If I said no, I'd be in the wrong
I wish you were near so I could send a hug
but then I'd be afraid you'd get my flu-bug!
Happy Valentine's Day cutie .... and from the looks of all the "yes's" you sure did end up with a handful of Valentines... We gals sure know a good thing when we see it... hugs, lindalaw
Yes I Will...Now Will You
(oh, I forgot you have to I filled the arrows heart with my special love potion just4U!!
Love & Hugzz
Happy Valentine's Day!
Vickie :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A friend willing to be your Valentine
But I ain't built for the lovers' line
I guess two men can exchange such
If neither of the expects very much
- Bill
Love your Valentine's poem..You are so sweet.
Peace and light and mucho love,
Amber "V"
What a cute write. I suppose everything will be the same eve after V-day.
Mary
Christine
This is so blissfully-sweet!!!
And...Oh yes! I will be your Valentine!!! ;o)
Sandie Angel ;o)
I love your work! Must i get in line;-)
Love,
Eileen