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Bus Ride in Spain
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 At Monte Gordo, the train’s last stop in Portugal,
I’m the one to exit and cross the Rio Changa aboard
a quaint ferry that follows the river current sideways,
landing ten minutes later in Ayamonte,
where Spain goes to fish.

Late afternoon I hop a bus
right out of Disney, cluttered with animals
in a variety of shapes and sizes, mothers juggling
babies, bottles, and belongings, young people
with guitars and radios playing the current Latin hits.
I’m in the rear balanced on my travel-worn two-suiter,
next to a buxom woman eating garlic and blowing
a Spanish tune in my direction.

Midway to Seville the bus jerks to a stop,
tossing passengers and bags into a chaotic pile
of arms and legs, squeals, grunts, and body odors.
When I untangle myself from the mayhem, I see
our driver standing in the middle of the road shaking
his fists and screaming Spanish obscenities
at the driver of a farm wagon blocking our way,
fellow passengers easing my impatience by sharing
a variety of cheeses and delectable libations.

It is sundown when our driver returns to the bus,
makes a gesture at the farmer, grinds his gears,
weaves his lazy way along the road to Seville.
There I bid adios to new-found friends,
search the city for an inexpensive place to sleep,
settle for one of the King Alfonso hotels,
a grand old Ritz, four bucks a night.

Later I retire to sleep off my martinis.
 

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 Reviews of "Bus Ride in Spain"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
I love this, Gene! I feel that I am right there with you as I hang on to every word. So well done. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
Lord, does this bring back memories or what!
the radio, the 'garlic' women, the Spanish obscenities,
cursing a definite art form in Spain..
and that seen better days hotel..oh yes.
This is splendid, Gene, splendid.

John

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 4, 2011
I can imagine the frustration of the bus driver, but the scene induces smiles........How laid back life must be there!Neat story, Gene...

Anna

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2011
Thanks for sharing this Gene, a joy to read,your superbly written journey poem!

Reviewed on April 3, 2011
This is wonderful, colorful and I can picture the whole scene...except I want to read a poem about that hotel....:) Morgan.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
Gene, thanks for my first visit to Spain. Martinis or Sangria may be prerequisites for the bus trip portion. Especially if seated next to the "buxom woman blowing garlic". Your words make the journey as vivid as a tour with David Attenborough on the Discovery channel. No, actually far better because imagination would be left unused with the TV coverage, just as would be your romantic recollections which are priceless gems. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
Gene, I have always wanted to go to Spain! I felt like I was riding along side you on that bus ride seeing the sights, and smells of everything around you. What I am trying to say is you pulled me in and I experienced it like I was there. Great work! Take care, ~Chessly :)

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
I swear this is so reminiscent of Mr. Hemingway I thought you would have capped it off by stopping by the place where he wrote "A Clean and Well Lit Place." Excellent writing...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
Spoken like a true wayfarer, but what a great way to get an “education.” Well said sir, a very enjoyable read.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
Nothing happens by accident, does it? What fun! J'nia

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
Never been overseas, at least to Europe, ad I love these writes of yours cause I learn of countries that I likely will never see..I also learned alot from Andy below how people get as they grow older...thanks to both of you...e

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Quite an adventure!
The Spanish country version of a traffic jam?
I feel my nose coming alive :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Good to see the other side of the real people of Spain.

George

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
The real; raw side to Spain.
The buxom woman, lol. I don't know why but Mediterranean look super until they hit 30-ish then become right old bloaters. Growing beards faster than I can, to boot. Funny ole place is mainland south Europe.

Top write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Amazing bus-ride; filled with sights and sounds and vivid images. Nice of you to let us ride along, Gene. ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Quite the bus ride, Gene. Well done.


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