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He Walked Away
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The outer passes away; the innermost is the same yesterday, today, and forever. Thomas Carlyle





He Walked Away


He threw his ring, into the pond
And watched the ripples spread
Her halo of the moonlight gone
At rest in muddied bed


In peaceful grave, the circle saved
Their promise that slipped thru
He walked away, from all she gave
To love somebody new


I wrote the poem for the picture





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 Reviews of "He Walked Away"
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 13, 2004
Lady A, an awesome picture and write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
deep and provocative ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
This is very powerful. I really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Lady A, you are a gem...this one does indeed hurt...but people throw love away everyday...I hope the ring was insured...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
excellent verse........

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Very powerful write and quote, Poet.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Well, Lady G.G.Hormonal, you sure do know how to
stun the senses! Superb poem!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Painful write. I felt the pain of this even though nothing like this has ever happened to me. Great poetry.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
In one word anita...FANTASTIC...floria

Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Oh Anita, I am living this poem right this very minute...this is so very poignant. Kerry

Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Wow..powerful and so moving, excellent poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
You gave us a mental portrait to carry around inside of our thoughts for a few days with this latest fine poem. Good writing.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Powerful poem, Anita, and once again, a powerful, powerful quote.

Reviewed on May 12, 2004
(((lady a)))

heart shattering write, like a bullet to the chest :(

o, so melancholy and so damn true for many...hope you haven't experienced this horror--i have, and it wasn't pretty :( *tears*

(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
It fits perfectly and is a powerfully emotive write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Wow!!

Dynamite write that blows the heart apart Anita!!

Hope you okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 12, 2004
good write, anita; well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D


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