Sometimes, a good cry is what one needs to heal. Good write Lady A!
~ Sandie May Angel ~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
Did you know tears set off an opium type chemical in brain.
Well done Lady A of the tear factor..
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2004
BEAUTIFUL POETRY!
The expressions and imagary is
excellent in this one. lady A~
'Beneath the surface of pooled tears
Rests best~~ whats left~~ unsaid
And wash away cold waves of fears
To sink thru muddied beds "
ladyP
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
They can too Anita......A most touching.....and beautiful poem...
Lady A...you earned your name with this one
ms human factor...exquisite poetry that
touches the soul!
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
A simply spiritual cleansing write...yes tears are definatley part of the healing process...wonderful poetry...but then again of course it is from a wonderful poet, afterall...Fletcher B
Ahhhh! The agony and the ecstasy, Anita! Emotional cleansing that leads to deep inner healing and resolution is THE BEST - like a good shower and hair wash after a two-week campout! How many of us actually resist confronting the status quo and just let life rumble on while the rust of submerged emotion eats away at our inner core day after day... we can look so good on the outside but eventually the fragility begins to give way... Soothing and purging write, AS EVER!! Let the cleansing waters run through! Kudos to you, Lady A. Kate xx
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
I love everything about this whole presentation, so beautiful.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
I am a leaf
set adrift in life,
No matter which way
I twist and turn,
There is nothing
I can do,
But spin around
as teardrops fall
and think of you.
Brilliant - makes one think of the rust that gathers in the heart;
then cleansed by love and purity.
A message to soothe the soul. Your friend Bill
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
BEAUTIFUL poem, Anita...Touching and takes the reader inside your verses...BRILLIANT!
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~ Sandie May Angel ~
Well done Lady A of the tear factor..
The expressions and imagary is
excellent in this one. lady A~
'Beneath the surface of pooled tears
Rests best~~ whats left~~ unsaid
And wash away cold waves of fears
To sink thru muddied beds "
ladyP
Wish I wrote it! Truly. ;)
ty, Dani
ms human factor...exquisite poetry that
touches the soul!
Love Tinka
Very healing write.
you portrayed so well here.
Our hearts can become like the jagged rocks
when we suffer heartbreak,
but like the rushing stream
that smooths those rough edges,
our tears can soothe the pain
provide salve for the wound
provide healing for the soul
Anthony
set adrift in life,
No matter which way
I twist and turn,
There is nothing
I can do,
But spin around
as teardrops fall
and think of you.
Brilliant - makes one think of the rust that gathers in the heart;
then cleansed by love and purity.
A message to soothe the soul. Your friend Bill