Tones A Firm Impression (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Wonderful rhyme and flow, just a lovely poem of deep thoughts and metaphors.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2004

For words float cast upon the air
Fall capture to the winds
But when they're kissed by lips of pair
They're guided back.....within

perfect...such verse of hope and light...well done..love your work...
we are so blessed to have you here..I love your mind...

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 7, 2004

Loved the metaphor and imagery in this - AS EVER!! The juxtaposition of the moist, soft bed of the heart versus the cold steel bars of imprisonment. Wonderful paradox that, having "broken its shackles", love desires to be locked in that wondrous prison of "the secret place" again - well, that's my take on it anyway!! Your rhythm and flow are dreamy, as always! Another beaut, Anita! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on September 6, 2004

Very sensual and beautifully written...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 6, 2004

This is so beautifully sensual! Excellent!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2004

Lady A, I only have too words: Simply Beautiful...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2004

Beautiful poem that flows smoothly and touches the heart.

Andrea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

Soul-grasping write, Anita. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

Beautiful poem Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Dear Lady A,

Awesome poetry and so emotive, thank you for sharing.
Beautifully written A :):)

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

When thought transcends, and births as deed
Confinment poles the edge

nicely said!

SueB

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

(((lady a)))

this one is breathtaking--mesmerizing--BEAUTIFULLY presented and written! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

This is wonderful Anita, from top to bottom. I especially like the last stanza.

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Lovely poem, Anita; especially like the first stanza.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Very nice. Great rhyme. Love the pic too.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Enchanting and enhancing , Lady.....
Wondrous write....
This is the clinching stanza " For words float cast upon the air
Fall capture to the winds
But when they're kissed by lips of pair
They're guided back.....within "

Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

beautiful write and pic, anita! well done! (((HUGS)))