I will be a distant voice to you A forgotten history Foreign now and indistinct Behind your memories
I once lived in the moment Tho temporal by shade Arise on fluttered whisper Descending on the fade
Pax A 8/06
I get ironic inspirations everywhere~ This was inspired after watching a phone commercial, although the voice in my poem was in NO way a metaphore for phone service.
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Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
When I read this I feel the bittersweet of time. Very effective. JM
this is truly brilliant! I don't know how to explain my reasons for this...it's just brilliant! I had to go back and reread it 2 times...not because I didn't get it, but because it is 'brilliant'! I loved it and I've saved it. You should have a feeling of deep satisfaction...you did a great job with this piece!
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