The smallest seeds of rejuvination, are sometimes held so deep within our hearts and minds. By penetrating incisions, or wounds, these seeds are exposed to light and life, along with the possibilities of new beginnings.......Pax A
Life Reborn By Death Of Deed
Scored and scarred upon the surface Sliced incisions whole by two Ripened by the tide of harvest Seasoned life, to die as juice
There upon the act of dying By hand of man, or winter's kill Vested pockets of the seedlings Life renews......ah.....yes it will!
So much might within the smallest! Such abundance in the seed! Seasoned life to die on harvest Life reborn by death of deed
Your poetry has reached a higher level Anita and is most powerfully penned! What have you planted in your garden;-) or is it a new brand of cookies madw with grey matter;-) Hey Ed, you'd better watch out;-)
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
You truly have penned perfection here ..
marvelous work..
I DO marvel at your work..truly!
Vesna
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Masterful....
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
My...you are an exceedingly talented wordsmith! You always manage to pack a suberb 'punch'...'Life reborn by death of deed' ...wonderful close to a very strong write. Love Panda :)
This pen is awesome insight into the basics of living. It's the simplicity of slicing fruit and digesting it's harvest that, when applied to living, seems more profound. This is my kind of poem...one that teaches living and the inportance of life with simplicity. Will man ever realize that in the smaller details, living can be personified.
Love,
Susan
this is truly awesome poetry! I love the thoughts within it and the picture is simply breathtaking!
Susan
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Profound and very wise words you penned in this poem excellent PAX...
"So much might within the smallest!
Such abundance in the seed!
Seasoned life to die on harvest
Life reborn by death of deed"
This is beautiful, profound, multi-leveled and just in time for the impending fall season. There is so much motion of change in your words but from within the change comes the rebirth. Like the morning glory that closes only to open again on the new day, your verses remind us that only through adaptation and change will we continue to evolve into something better. The person we are today is the direct result of all that we have survived, seen and learned. Excellent, Anita!
Take care,
Sherry
Very intriguing Alice and very visual on visceral levels.
In my eyes ... you are led often by a cunning muse that takes you into lands that no one else has explored. You are, in my mind, an artist that has allowed herself to stay open to possibility and the expression of such.
Again ... I am blessed and often nourished (in the soul) to read your work. Excellent visionary work!
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Engages the mind.
marvelous work..
I DO marvel at your work..truly!
Vesna
Love,
Susan
Your spiritual and metaphysical side comes to the fore in this tasteful and delicious write..
The Apple was the Downfall of Man, and perhaps its seeds will be his Deliverance..
Peter
Ah, lovely!
Susan
"So much might within the smallest!
Such abundance in the seed!
Seasoned life to die on harvest
Life reborn by death of deed"
Joselyn
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
In my eyes ... you are led often by a cunning muse that takes you into lands that no one else has explored. You are, in my mind, an artist that has allowed herself to stay open to possibility and the expression of such.
Again ... I am blessed and often nourished (in the soul) to read your work. Excellent visionary work!
Your friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg