I have a Texas friend that every so often writes a poem or refrain, and sends it to me, and asks me to tweak it or add to it....this is one we came up with last month...(he is into that sad Cowboy stuff, which I am not...but its fun to fake it!)
I NEVER LOOKED INTO HER EYES
I never looked her in the eye
When it was time to say goodbye
I knew that if I saw her pain
That I would surely ........just remain
If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry
(this is his refrain)
But I had things I had to do
Yet what they were......I had no clue
The wild wind, was pulling me....
I always knew.....I had to leave
If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry
She never ever told me ....no
She never said...please stay .....don't go
I didn't listen, I didn't find
The time to look into her eyes.......
If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry
At times I think, I would go back
To try to pick up all the slack
And maybe if I were to try
I know I'd be the one to....... cry
I'm sorry babe.....I didn't know
The hurt I caused, when I'd just......go
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Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
I had some hip-hop on in the background as I read this. The contrast was quite compelling.
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