It was all me wasn’t it?
Oh I got from you the combustible materials
With which I set myself on fire,
But only because I hoped seeing me
You would enter in to that blaze
And become one with me
The only way two people can...
By shedding in ashes all that could keep us apart
And allowing the seething heat
To meld us in to a new creation.
It was your choice to stand back and toast marshmallows,
Making me useful for a pleasant evening.
I’ll be glad to always give you warmth,
But now you wonder why I have become white hot
And you must stand so much farther back
And shield your face from mine.
How long did you think such a blaze would go
Unnoticed by somebody who understands
The greater purpose of fire?
What happened to me now?
She’s here.
And if you feel burned just remember
We are all just living with the choices we have made.
John H. Bidwell
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Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
John,
This one is excellent......
I have to agree the last line is
volumes......
It was all me wasn’t it?
Oh I got from you the combustible materials
With which I set myself on fire,
But only because I hoped seeing me
You would enter in to that blaze
...hmmm..my dear friend ..what can I say but that I completely KNOW what you are saying here...thanks for nudging me into re.evaluating my oen situation..hey bro..you're a life-saver...
Exquisite piece..yup..i'm saving it...
Wow.. And if this fire can combine our souls.. Searing our love.. we will at once be whole.. Choices.
But only because I hoped seeing me
You would enter in to that blaze
And become one with me
The only way two people can...
By shedding in ashes all that could keep us apart
And allowing the seething heat
To meld us in to a new creation.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
This one is excellent......
I have to agree the last line is
volumes......
Peggy
So very true that last line.....dang!!
Love Tinka
Oh I got from you the combustible materials
With which I set myself on fire,
But only because I hoped seeing me
You would enter in to that blaze
...hmmm..my dear friend ..what can I say but that I completely KNOW what you are saying here...thanks for nudging me into re.evaluating my oen situation..hey bro..you're a life-saver...
Exquisite piece..yup..i'm saving it...
Ves :)
Wow.. And if this fire can combine our souls.. Searing our love.. we will at once be whole.. Choices.
But only because I hoped seeing me
You would enter in to that blaze
And become one with me
The only way two people can...
By shedding in ashes all that could keep us apart
And allowing the seething heat
To meld us in to a new creation.
INTENSE!! BRAVO JOHN
this is intense!!! BRAVOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO