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Take Me
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Take Me

Take me friend, to where you have in mind.
Please let me leave my troubles all behind.
For you, by chance, reside in paradise.
If I could visit it would sure be nice.

The chance to ride your horses on the trails,
And even help to feed them from the bales.
To ride and fish, the scent of woodland pine,
Please take me there you precious friend of mine.

We’d ride and talk and knowing you we’d laugh.
The time would fly as if it’s cut in half.
Your off road quad I’d like to give a try.
You share all this, I’ll feel like I can fly.

It’s sounds so good, can summer be this grand?
But with such joy I also understand
I am a poet, something you should know.
I’m going to have to leave before the snow.

For I can’t bear the loss of such a friend,
But poets are unable to pretend,
And what we see, for us what is most real
Is all the love inside of us we feel.

On horses, falling snow and you and me-
That kind of beauty I just can not see.
It would become a cross I can’t endure
As I would fall in love with you for sure.

So let this be a summer to remember,
And let it last perhaps to mid November.
And I will pray but doubt I can believe
That maybe I won’t ever have to leave.

John H. Bidwell

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 Reviews of "Take Me"
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Incredibly beautiful, my friend...
I hope you have found true love
at last. You deserve it so much.

Love,
~Linda

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
love the longing above a mix of uncertainty, John. 5th stanza is oh so true. Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Most beautiful piece John!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
A beautiful piece of pleading done to perfection!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Lovely poem John. As Eileen said, bittersweet.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Sounds so bittersweet John, a yearning to not have to leave
yet not even sure of going. Very heartfelt. Beautiful poem!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Moving descriptive verse; elicits a sense of melancholy. A lovely read.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
This is painful, somehow, John. I hear the mixed emotions in this one.


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