But Then There’s You (poem) by John H Bidwell on AuthorsDen

But Then There’s You
by John H Bidwell → (All Poetry by John H Bidwell)
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OK, no giving up.
But Then There’s You No Valentines this year I guess The world of love is such a mess A maze there’s just no getting through… But then there’s you. I’ve loved and lost and had enough It’s just no win- this loving stuff No matter what I say or do… But then there’s you. I should be cured of wanting love And begging from that God above I’d give in to the world of blue… But then there’s you. It never will make sense to me The lack of love I always see Just wonder what it’s coming to… But then there’s you. I try to stay away from love And all that I’ve been dreaming of For after all- it can’t come true … But then there’s you. “Just give up hope” I tell my heart For love will tear your life apart To feel this way is nothing new… But then there’s you. So many times I want to scream For all I ever do is dream It’s hopeless; I’m without a clue… But then there’s you. Can there still be some hope to find? Or have I finally lost my mind? If I’m to love- God- tell me who?… I hope it’s you. John H. Bidwell

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

You express the half of this romantic holiday that tears lovers apart well at least one of them Excellent piece John!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Tere is always hope always a dream...always God to turn to for help!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess

you are a true romantic john and you do express yourself beautifully

Reviewed by E T Waldron

John I hope so too;-) You have such a beautiful way of expressing yourself, I hope she sees you as her valentine;-)wonderful poem!

etw

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

No the journey sure is not over because of the person you speak about.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Your journey is not over John ..It has just begun. I know you feel alone, abandoned.. scared .. But this will lessen with each day .. Look around you.. There are so many roads and directions to take..Pick one.. Go out.. Have fun.. Learn to laugh again.. Then you will learn to love again. And she will be a very lucky lady. She could be right in front of your eyes. Never stop taking chances.

Always,

Erica~
Your writing as always is superb!