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Lightning
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Lightning

The thing about electricity…
Lightning…
Is that it has you before you know it.
You only know it is too late.

Over the course of my work week
I must pass through the gym several times per day.
Who knows how I carry the cares of the world?
A friendly, cheerful disposition if I remember-
But the poet’s escape into other dimensions
Is all too easy.
I’m seldom where I appear.

One special, remarkable lady is just taking care of herself.
How wonderful to keep healthy.

Out of nowhere, into my world comes this cheerful “Hello.”
I’m almost past and through the door-
Looking back, “Hi,”
I’m gone, and thank goodness I didn’t hit anything.

Four- three- two- one-
Hey, that was…nice.
Nice?

I think I need a drink of water.
The water fountain is right handy…
Out in the gym.

Three- two- one- composed-
Back out into the gym I find
A ghost town.
The wind no longer in my sails,
The air leaves my lungs.
Everybody’s gone, and that was so fast.
At least I’m free to return to the poet’s dimensions-
Including wistful longing and dreams
That dissipate like morning mist.

I can’t imagine what witnesses might have seen.
I get my drink of water,
Needed it more than I knew.

So I turn to head back into my real world
But I find…
Lightning!

That smile floors me…
So alive.
“Looking for me?”
Zero composure-
It is too late.
Toast.

John H. Bidwell

 

 


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 Reviews of "Lightning"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 31, 2011
You have effectively recalled and shared a very special experience through your verses here, John. I am not sure if you meant "lightning" or "lightening" though, as they have quite different meanings. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on November 12, 2010
I love this inside view John!
we all experience the jetty nerves
I studder with mine & laugh at it
but I must say I love the in closing here
as I do this:
"But the poet’s escape into other dimensions
Is all too easy.
I’m seldom where I appear."

Soooooo True To Our Creative Minds!
We as poets just go there :)

Workouts & Mental Timeouts
Vickie

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Reviewed on November 8, 2010
John: Who really listens?

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 8, 2010
A very artful poem inter-woven with humor ~
Solace in poetry indeed!
Ever,
Christine


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