I’m here in our gazebo, and I feel the morning breeze.
The day gives birth to springtime as the sun shines through the trees.
Though some may see a lonely man, I’m not as I appear.
My heart is full of magic so don’t tell me you’re not here.
So many people come to see the beauty of this place.
I know it’s all around me but I only see your face.
Of course I want to touch you but instead I catch a tear,
And feel what you have given me; don’t tell me you’re not here.
You know that as I came here we were walking hand in hand,
Though no one else could see it you and I can understand,
It’s really not mysterious for love has made it clear.
I can not live without you so don’t tell me you’re not here.
At times we may be conscious that we live so far apart
But mostly I just know that you are living in my heart.
No matter what it looks like no one else could be so near.
Forget the rest, the heart knows best, don’t tell me you’re not here.
You are so right, John...Gazebos can hold dear, the magical places for a poet's heart! So fitting that love is there, and all around ....for us to write about.
Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
At times we may be conscious that we live so far apart
But mostly I just know that you are living in my heart.
No matter what it looks like no one else could be so near.
Forget the rest, the heart knows best, don’t tell me you’re not here.
Perfect!!!
Please repost :)
Vesna
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Wow! You are talented,
my friend. This brought
me to tears.
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Beautiful, haunting and a touch of bittersweet but a Very Exceptional Write with much feeling felt from the writer too...Excellant John!
~Nikki~
Thanks for the comment
on mine...
I am glad it was special to you...
Also, Remember that
you are not without
her today...
For her spirit lives
within your heart...
She looks upon you
on this special Mother's Day, with
a warm smile on her
face...
Hugs,
Trixie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Exceptional, captures intense emotions so smoothly.
John!
This is a masterpiece.. Sad in some way but filled with your love .. Incredible write.. She is very lucky! If you feel her .. she is there.. Bravo Bravo!!
Lady Vivian
But mostly I just know that you are living in my heart.
No matter what it looks like no one else could be so near.
Forget the rest, the heart knows best, don’t tell me you’re not here.
Perfect!!!
Please repost :)
Vesna
my friend. This brought
me to tears.
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~Linda~~
~Nikki~
This is so beautiful..
Thanks for the comment
on mine...
I am glad it was special to you...
Also, Remember that
you are not without
her today...
For her spirit lives
within your heart...
She looks upon you
on this special Mother's Day, with
a warm smile on her
face...
Hugs,
Trixie
This is a masterpiece.. Sad in some way but filled with your love .. Incredible write.. She is very lucky! If you feel her .. she is there.. Bravo Bravo!!
So many people come to see the beauty of this place.
I know it’s all around me but I only see your face.
Reindeer