The night has come and clutched the forest scene
With claws of darkness sunk in to the hearts
Of all but those whose senses are most keen,
The few for whom the night is where it starts.
No sound comes forth to break the mystic spell,
So silence serves to seal the somber mood.
For some, though fearful all may not be well,
There is no choice but venture out for food.
Though each may step alert with utmost care
A shadow swift descending from the trees
Would mark that victim feeding unaware
Of silent death that rides the evening breeze.
Too late one learns that fate has taken flight
As talons close to take away the night.
John H. Bidwell
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Reviews of "The Owl"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Awesome imagery and a Superb Write of a Spellbinding Night Time Predator!!!!
~Nikki~
I agree! Excellent write! You nailed this one, John. From one who has studied predator and prey for half a century.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
John,
This is beautiful
"The few for whom the night is where it starts.
No sound comes forth to break the mystic spell,
So silence serves to seal the somber mood.
For some, though fearful all may not be well,
There is no choice but venture out for food"
PJ
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
~Nikki~
Love
Tinka
great imagery
William
This is beautiful
"The few for whom the night is where it starts.
No sound comes forth to break the mystic spell,
So silence serves to seal the somber mood.
For some, though fearful all may not be well,
There is no choice but venture out for food"
PJ
In Spirit,
Bear
and the prey. Loved it :)
~~Linda~~