John, this is an amazine tribute, not just to yourself, but to all who have climbed out of that mental rut of being treated bad. The simplicity and the honesty in the well rhymed piece hits home.... thank you for sharing this.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
..the rhythm & rhyme is perfect...so are the light-filled words..methinks women tend to forget what they desire in a partner thus they choose the one furthest from their dream-love..why is that?..Perhaps they've been watching too many movies...
The woman who wins your love will be very fortunate indeed...guys like YOU don't come 'round too often...Bless you John!!..and DON'T change...just give that love and watch miracles happen...
Awwwww, I love honey! Geesh, this is another (!) write I connect with. An expression I've been known to make is this: "I have so much love to give, but no one's anxious for this prescription I have to offer."
You touch me with every write, John.
Tami
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Interesting question that few could answer from their realities. Great write!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
"If people bump a honey jar,
It doesn’t matter who they are,
Some honey will be spilled about-
For what goes in is what comes out."
One day someone's going to realize the treasure that's in you...
Wonderful expression and flow of words...
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
In Spirit,
Bear
~Chrissie
Love Tinka
The woman who wins your love will be very fortunate indeed...guys like YOU don't come 'round too often...Bless you John!!..and DON'T change...just give that love and watch miracles happen...
Vesna
I hope you find that special
someone.
Love,
~~Linda~~
Awwwww, I love honey! Geesh, this is another (!) write I connect with. An expression I've been known to make is this: "I have so much love to give, but no one's anxious for this prescription I have to offer."
You touch me with every write, John.
Tami
It doesn’t matter who they are,
Some honey will be spilled about-
For what goes in is what comes out."
One day someone's going to realize the treasure that's in you...
Wonderful expression and flow of words...