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Future memory...
by Chanti Niven → (All Poetry by Chanti Niven)
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Ever had romantic thoughts like these? The ambience is important. For this one I chose an ocean view.


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Distant-gazing eyes

taking in a sunrise

of cocktail hues

glazing the moody blues

of the rolling ocean

Lulled, with languid sand

sculpted to our feet

and warm between our toes

my freckled nose

turned up against the sun

Your smile radiating

white as surf

Sultry sea spray and ocean scent

inhaled deep

into our hungry lungs

I sense the faint touch

of your lips upon my neck

as you brush my hair aside

and I can't hide

the beating of my heart

- the pulsing in my throat

and goose-bumps that rise

upon on my skin

 

Future memory?



© Chanti 2004

 
 


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 Reviews of "Future memory..."
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on June 21, 2005
a beautiful, evocative write...love the sparse language and eternal naturalism, it evokes passion...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
I have many "future?" memories like this. Because Michael is in New York, taking his paramedic studies, I dream things like you say here. This so very sweet, so very romantic, so very tender. Thnx for sharing Chanti. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Awesome poem.
Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2004
for sure, hehe, it is intesting to think tht all these features attenst to the garden inside, that notice, perhaps ascew, as not, to be noticed, that is the feeling I got

the idioms of pleasure, Al

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on November 21, 2004
Well, this is pleasantly stimulating, and filled with passion. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
I wish I did have thoughts like those. Sadly, I am not considered the remotest bit romantic so I have to rely on seeing images such as those you wove on this elegant tapestry. An exquisite write Chanti.

Reviewed on November 8, 2004
Chanti,

A lovely, deeply compassionate, soulfully expressed write - wonderful!!

Robert

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on November 7, 2004
I like the imagery. So sensual. Plays and feeds on dreams. Sizzling write.

Reviewed on November 7, 2004
well wish i had read this one first but now after reading this i even understand the other write better,,
I could feel this one and what wonderful thing to have in memory present past or future
Tommy

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on November 7, 2004
Thanks to all who have commented on this poem. I thought that a reply sent to me by another poet is worth looking at. Read 'Do you Remember?' http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=122015 I will forward your comments to the author. I am sure you will enjoy it.
Thanks
Chanti

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Uniquely created, Chanti and very lovely thoughts expressed. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Wonderful magical moments to be dreamed! Splendid poem Chanti!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
awesome poetry!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Hi Chanti Yeah I think a few thoughts like those. ;)
Very lovely and passionate.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
I honestly could smell the salt air and hear the ocean roar. This is truly a unique idea. Liked it very much.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
A highly original concept Chanti...
And you do it so well...
Peter

Reviewed by Anthony Hall
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
The ocean view of this poem is wonderful! Like the tides, our dreams and desires roll out and hopefully these becomes future memories that roll back in...

Anthony

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
What a lovely "future memory" to look forward to!
These words are beautifully formed, and as scintillating
as the author.
I applaud you, and like Ms. Russell, I liked the question
at the end.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Wonderful passion. Nice write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Chanti,
A picture perfect description and a heartfelt moment. Beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
A refreshing change from the politics of the day. LOL.
A good write, Chanti.

Reviewed on November 3, 2004
(((chanti)))

sounds like a good one :) beautiful poetry, exquisitely penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
future memory...wonderful concept and a well written poem

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Stunning Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Very dramatic, living in Nova Scotia I could taste the salt air and your words seeded the thoughts of passion. Well done....Felix

Reviewed by Wayne Porter
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Very romantic, The ocean seems to contibute to your magical spell.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Bring the future on! :-) Great writee and yes I too have had thoughts like these :-)


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