Words slip silent as tears from my eyes This expression, as embers within a dying fire. I blow fiercely upon the coals and watch them for a moment burn red and hot and yet it's not enough I cannot capture the essence of this love I have for you nor hope to render adequately its depth. The scope of it too vast for me to fathom or explain I am both an observer and a participant - A squealing child on a funfair ride A perfect morning dew drop in a graceful fall from a leaf I am a cloud adrift in a sky streaked with colours and vivid hues of reds, pinks and blues In the face of such beauty I can only hold my breath in wonderment Clasp my hands upon my breast and sigh All else I've felt before you has been a lie...
Of all the lines in this magnificent ode, these strike me as the epitomy of your love, Chanti:
"A perfect morning dew drop
in a graceful fall from a leaf"
With these lines, you've combined water and growth with such entwined adoration, this reader aches with the want of what you have, even as it deems it yours without condemnation.
A beauty of a divine collaboration between mind and soul.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
A beautiful Beautiful Poem. That is true love.
Beautiful!
Tracey xoox(c :)42
'All else I've felt before you
has been a lie... "
Those words say a lot, Chanti.
You are fortunate that your love can be returned. There are those of us who feel as you do but cannot be fulfilled due to circumstances and societal pressures etc. Be well and happy.
He needs a wife. She needs a reason to trust him. He fell for her at first sight. She, not so much.
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"A perfect morning dew drop
in a graceful fall from a leaf"
With these lines, you've combined water and growth with such entwined adoration, this reader aches with the want of what you have, even as it deems it yours without condemnation.
A beauty of a divine collaboration between mind and soul.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Beautiful!
Tracey xoox(c :)42
My.
God.
This gave me goosebumps and brought tears to my eyes, my friend. If only I could express my love as well. You inspire me.
Love you (and miss you) lots,
Tami
Felix
has been a lie... "
Those words say a lot, Chanti.
You are fortunate that your love can be returned. There are those of us who feel as you do but cannot be fulfilled due to circumstances and societal pressures etc. Be well and happy.
Regis
You are blessed my friend!!
Love Tinka