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Unforgotten
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
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Waiting with immense desire
 pent up passion
 in vile attire
 dank, dark
 crevices
 patient
 you wait...
 My Dear, you are a treacherous snake.


 Scurrying here and there
 across naive land
 virginal dress
 waiting
 noble
 sacrificial lamb...
 I am the one you loathe, I am.


 You glare, I stare
 our eyes have met
 you slither, I scurry
 the end begins...


 

 

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 Reviews of "Unforgotten"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
excellent

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Whoa! intriguing write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
Powerfully expressed! Thank you, Zenith. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Very intense, Z.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Perfect write!!!!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
a wonderful poem

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Very deep and dark ~Z~ intense dynamic write!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
don't you hate it when that happens? this sounds like the end of a relationship...could be either romantic or business, but the feelings feel kinda the same...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
insightful write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Very well done crafty.....

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
INteresting write, ~Z~, I wonder who you might be speaking towards in this descriptive one...Peace thru Love, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Very well done, Zenith! I really like the way it flows. Great imagery. Thank you.

Carmen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
nicely written!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Some real power behind this one!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Vivid images in this write. Well done Zen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
Very well written with vivd imageries Zenith!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
Loved the dark feeling of this, it really brings images to mind, the poem itself seems to crawl on its belly- very well-written.

Reviewed on March 8, 2004
I loved this, wow..just gave me such a feeling this evening, excellent,

Reindeer


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