Thoughts Penned In A Prism, Part I (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

"Altruistic wanton moments

have vanished into granules

transcending time..."

What a strange vision these words conjure! An intriguing write, Zenith!

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

interesting write!

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

I'm not sure about those "altruistic wanton moments". Interesting.

Doc

Reviewed by Candida Eittreim

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Zenith,
I love this. It's filled with imagery and I can hear the hurt. Beautiful work~~

Candy

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on April 18, 2004

gripping. excellent gothic write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

Outstanding Zenith!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

I have walked the cemeteries and wondered about their lives.
Great write ~Z~

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Milady Zenith, more frequent than I would like to own, has life placed me where your poem drifted. But I like to think that dreams are the answer to hopelessness...~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

This was beautiful and outstanding, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

I have often (in Depressive Mode) thought about how those
in the grave no longer have to bow to demands.
But loving life as I do, I quickly put the thought out of my mind.

This is a fine piece of work, Zenith!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

I find this a fascinating write, Zenith, and one which bounces around many ideas like the prism you suggest! To me, hopelessness equates with all the demands that are overpowering; but the altruism that freely gives is releasing - like life beyond the mirrors. Also, that kindnesses shown are never lost and have eternal worth. Thank you for this: much said in a few expertly penned lines. KB

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

A thoughtful piece, ~Z~, your philosopher is showing through...Peace & thanks for your comment on my recent write...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

A beautifully written reflective piece Zenith.
~Chrissie
Thank you for your comment on mine.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Very nice Z

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

This is beautiful, Zenith, love your independent spirit.

Safi
P.S. thanks for dropping bye!