Quiet drama and suppressed rebelliopn within these words, like chastising Reality... These two poems create an impressionistic flare of light in the gloom. Superbly done!
Is it rosemary that is symbolic of remembrance? Something aromatic, anyhow! Yes, to remember is never to be forgotten; some things are so valuable that they remain as a witness forever. Another beautiful kaleidoscope of wisdom and illumination here, Zenith. Thank you KB
Watch out for the prism, might make you feel like you are on an acid trip...LOL. Such pretty colors...homage to you as well, for you herein have sacrificed as well...beautiful...Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
This is a most superb piece, Zenith!
Beautiful words, excellently wrought!
This book is an autobiographical account of the lessons I learned about life and how I was able to apply them to inspire, motivate and empower others in my own work as a firefighter, as well in my daily life as a husband, a father and a man. When I w
She never felt safe at home as a young girl, and didn't understand why when she finally escaped she wasn't safe in the big wide world either ...effectively jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!
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You wrote two truly excellent pieces of prose here. I'm proud of you.
Candy
TRASK
Beautiful words, excellently wrought!
Love, Sheila
Love Tinka
"I shall express my
humble homage
for those
that
sacrificed
for all
mankind"
On this twenty-third day of Spring, I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Simply marvelous write.