Symptoms (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

:-)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

Concentrated power and emotion in this well espressed poem Zenith! Bravo!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

sounds like you need the love doctor. powerful observations.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

This is excellent Zeinth~

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Catches your attention like a hand carelessly laid upon a hot stove... very well done, descriptive and emotive, Zenith!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Eternal Sleep Will Come,i.e. Pray You Are Sleeping In Safe Place In Heaven Not Hell!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Fantastic descriptions!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Painful write Zenith!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Absolutely wonderful, well written poem and message. Thank you, Zenith.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Ouch! Painful write Zenith. Ofcourse it's not one that many can't bond with.
Powerful statement in few words.

Lisa

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

One of the best poems I have read on the subject of marriage and I totally agree with all that's in it.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Extremely Powerful poem, Zenith, about an extremely heartwrenching topic for many.

And again it amazes me that so many on AD post poems on similar topics on the same day.

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

This one hits home really hard Zee.
Well written

love
Ian

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Annulments are always there for this type of problem...~Z~, good to see you posting, have missed you...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Sad, so many love relationships go bad..
Gem of a write....
Hope all is sweet with you.........

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Wonderful write and good to see you back again.

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Zenith, I can appreciate the raw emotional expression in this poem...good work...~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 14, 2004

Great expression of emotion. So much truth captured in so few lines. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 13, 2004

Zenith, hi again. Been awhile since I've read your work and glad to read you again. You have captured so much in this brief write. Excellent job with external setting and internal thought / emotion! Dawn

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2004

Wow...having been through this I can tell you that this is so prolific and true...excellent meaning in your poem...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on July 13, 2004

I think this is great! And oh so true!
Who hasen't been there? God Bless you
whoever you are.
Good write!
Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 13, 2004

Been there, done that, burned the T-shirt. You've captured the wretchedness well.