Calling all deadbeat Dads (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Zenith,
I saw this poem and had to comment. It is great.
Thank you for reviewing my poem that I wrote for my daughter. This sort of situation is why she is my reason and why I am still protective of her even since she is grown. Rejection leaves many scars on our kids.
I could write a book on dead beat dads and the turmoil they bring. Maybe I will write a story on it one day. I helped many women in this state to get their child support because of my persistence to force the state and government to set presidence and do something for us women and our children. Sorry I rambled on, but this is a subject that gets me going.
AMEN woman, keep speaking your mind.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 7, 2003

Tell 'em, Z, tell 'em!!:)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Put both of your hands in the air... I will slap the ****HIGH FIVE**** !!! Damn it, I just couldn't have said it better! Love your prose.

Thanking you,

Teresa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

wonderfully written!

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

This needs to be displayed for all to see, it gives a great message.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

wow...love this write of urs...profound...BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Thanks for writing this so we can all sign on and denounce deadbeat dads! Excellent write Z!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Amen. Deadbeat dads are the real trash of the world. Next are abusers.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Well written and u hit the nail on the head

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This is so true...Great write..
Jenni

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

well written you tell 'em like it is Zenith
steve

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Excellent! Yes this needed to be said, and you have done this so well!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Dear Zenith, Excellent write, with a capitol E, Lady Z!!

tony:)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

~Z,
Oh I have known this one so very well.
Excellent Tribute both ways ;)
Peg

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

What a great poem and message for those deadbeat dads! I love the fact that you give recongnition and praise to all the fathers and dads who give their time and love to their own children ...as well as the children of those dead beat dads! Bravo!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

You go, Zenith!!! Tell it like it is... it needs to be heard...stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear