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Storm Clouds Brewing
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
  
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Evil is as evil does...
so say farewell...
what was just was...


eyes no longer holding life's light


using and abusing  starting fights


friends forced to ignore your  fate


nightly prayers to nullify hate


being callous, mean and cold


using dope sold your soul


storm clouds brewing...


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Storm Clouds Brewing "
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Well done - I like your style.

Tami

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Outstanding write..Floreann *****

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Such an excellent write on a sad subject! Very stirring write Z ~my best to you....

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
I absolutely loved this but it has left me wanting MORE of it...I would love you to do a follow up poem to IT if possible.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
ohh so stong, speaking words of a life..good write of a side of life

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Intense and well written.

Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Powerful and excellently written, Loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed on July 30, 2003
sounds like they were brewing for a while, huh? Good write....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Powerful and so true.....you write with style.

And thank you....for your kind words on my page..

My best, Dani

Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Intensely powerful write. Excellent.

Reviewed on July 30, 2003
(((zenith)))

this pulls no punches--very intense

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
I love this could feel the changes of the storms brewing

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
nicely expressed these storm clouds

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Very powerful write Z.


Trixie :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Awesome Z
an excellent short powerful writer

William

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
very intense!!!!

Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Intense!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
This one is so sad.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
This gave me chills! I've seen many weather the storm,,,They lost.
Good write. ~SH~

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Think I need some shutters for the storm

powerful words slicing through the air in my head

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Very good and well put!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Another insighful, so-much-emotion-packed-into-so-few-words poem. You're masterful in that way.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Well done...thank u......BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Well done Zenith!

Jack

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Chills down my spine, this says a lot in just a few words. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by graeme braithwaite (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Great write. Well put together.


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