Storm Clouds Brewing Part II (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ray Harris (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2003

Yet with the passing of the storm... there is serenity, a cleansed world, replenished waters... your joy!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Ooooo ~Z~ yea woman you definitely got that dark brooding haunting going on with the deep piece...Par Excellance!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

OOoh, this one gave me chills. Dark, brooding piece with great imagery and intelligent choice of words.

Julie :)

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Yes they do that, and then we go through the eye of the storm and then blow out the otherside of it.
Hang on tight HON!

Love Ch'erie

Great write.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

I know these feeling. If only they could be wished away. Well penned, mi'lady.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Excellent write Z...

Enjoyed...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Winning is for the sports people I guess. Excellent write! Thanks for stoppping my way.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Zenith...very deep and very sad.....great write...floria

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Storm Clouds Are a Brewen__

Excellent!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

You poetry is very deep and has a quality of insight that only comes from an excellent soul!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Haunting and sad. Great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Dynamic dark write Z~ Glad there are alternatives;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Sad but well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Imagery is vivid, message sad, expression exquisite.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Beautiful and profound write.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Beautifully written, and so very moving, this one touched me deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

So deeply sad. Hope you are doing OK Z.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Such sadness here but said so well. I especially loved the line "eyes overflow with hurricane force."