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Alone Again~~~
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When love is good, it's very good. Choose the wrong mate and hell, you'll feel...
Another night alone again with bated breath... she waits for him, jumbled thoughts play eerie tunes awaiting, angry intoxicated moods... Minutes last so very long... waiting for the one you love... Is this love, that traps her here... this life of angst mingled with fear... This love he slaps upon her face... so very confused she hesitates... Distasteful words, spit from his lips... his lips, no longer fit to kiss... Cringing from, his lustful touch... so rough so crude she gives, it up... Memories of passionate, love draws tears... he breaks the trance, your my recepticle...Dear... Who is this man, she held so dear... his essence of love, no longer near... demon eyes empty stares... Another night, alone again... with bated breath, she runs from him... free at last, no more fear... Alone... at peace, a life to start again...

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Reviews of "Alone Again~~~"

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Powerful and chilling creation. It's better to be alone than to be subjected to abuse. Well done.

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Wow, Zenith! You painted well a picture of abuse in a marriage gone wrong. Very well done. By the way, thank you for yor kind words about "The Mind's Child."

Love in Christ~~
Bonnie Q
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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Wonderfully-written and very inspiring!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

very interesting

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

a brilliant so well written write..Floreann *****

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Those are such painful moments. The tension so thick you could cut it with a knife. A most insightful write!!!!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Very well done, Zenith. It took me there, but glad I'm here.

Carmen

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

You poetry always conveys so much feeling. You have true power in your poetic voice.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Brilliant storytelling, Zenith! This is both a romantic cautionary tale and a heart-tugging diagram of the collapse of romantic intimacy! Wonderful, wonderful write!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Excellent poem, Zenith...very touching to my heart.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Another winner Zenith
written extremely well....

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

strangers who love.. very pensive and dwelling.
and when the mask is removed from the stranger..
who really dwells inside?
- very nice work - Donna

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Grabs the heart, so poignant. Well penned and emotive write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Z~ a brilliant write, love the word usage...this is superb!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Amazingly well written Zenith!!

It feels like you are talking to me here!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Hauntingly beautiful...

Trixie :)

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