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Do I Look Like I Mind?
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
  
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Do I look like I mind?
When you size me up for the kill
never missing a beat...
who taught you your skills?


Do I look like I mind?
Jobs elude you for years
supervising your kingdom...
while drinking, taking drugs.


Do I look like I mind?
When you stay out all night
my armor is ready...
I'm prepared for these fights.


Do I look like I mind?
When you cuss my ass out
look me straight in my eyes...
wanting my loyalty without doubt.


Do I look like I mind?
Enduring years of abuse
not anymore...
not since, I left you.


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 Reviews of "Do I Look Like I Mind?"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
!!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
amen! did what'cha had ta do grrrl, and movin' on! good piece of work right here!

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2004
bravo!

way to go, keep it that way

jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
~Z~, that was not a relationship, at least from the point of view of me...hope you dumped that jerk...excellent write & ya know? I think you do mind! Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Excellent write, Z!

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Very well written, Zenith. Glad to see you more actively writing again. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Glad to hear you left such a relationship! Great write.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
You're a strong woman, Z, and this poem proves it.

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Good for you!

Otherwise, still a wonderful poem

Reviewed on January 3, 2004
(((zenith)))

good on you--you got out before it was too late

i felt this one, deep, in my soul--i've been there

(((HUGS))) and stay strong, friend

and may 2004 bring you only GOOD things :)

karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Very touching write Zenith!!

I think I can relate to this one!!

Love Tinka


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