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Contemplating Life On An Old River Road

by Mr. Ed — Read all 1,530 poems by Mr. Ed

Monday, January 21, 2008


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“We will be known forever,


By the tracks we leave.”


 


A Native American Proverb


 


 


Whenever I travel the back roads


I always seek out nature and history


And remnants of ancient civilizations


My entire life, have always fascinated me


 


Many of the indigenous peoples we call ‘savages’


Had advanced civilizations long before Columbus


And far too much of their very ancient knowledge


Has now been so very sadly lost, to every one of us


 


On this trip, as I traveled along the Mississippi


I made it a point to visit ancient native mounds


Like so many of the cultures, now long gone


Their story, at least for me, still truly astounds


 


These very ancient inhabitants of these mound cities


Traded goods from Wisconsin to the Gulf of Mexico


But their ancient cities very mysteriously disappeared


Long before the first Europeans, to these places did go


 


The painting above depicts a very industrious Mound City Market


Where many goods and foods and medicines were traded every day


But most of these ancient, mysterious, Mound Cities were abandoned


By the year 1200 A.D., according to archaeological evidence found today


 


We will never know why so many of these very ancient cities disappeared


Or what knowledge these ancient traders, travelers, and astronomers had


But every time that I visit one of these mysterious, long gone, civilization sites


I wonder if one day, our modern civilization, might suddenly vanish, just like that


 


And perhaps, one day in Mother Earth’s not so distant future


Our modern civilization might be called ‘primitive and savage’


By very advanced and enlightened travelers from a distant galaxy


Who will visit this planet, to decide if it’s still a worthy place to live


 


We, too, will be known forever,


By the tracks we leave.


 


 


©2008, Mr. Ed


 

      


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
i like this

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
And perhaps, one day in Mother Earth’s not so distant future
Our modern civilization might be called ‘primitive and savage’...

Sadly, we digress daily.

Walt



Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
I am not so sure we would be very proud of the tracks we leave
I loved this poem because it dealt with times when we were one with our environment and used it not abused it

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Dear Ed,

I believe that humans have gone backward while embracing illusions of advancing the species. The tracks we now leave are only scars upon this beautiful, amazing earth.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
You bring out many fine points for one to ponder in this piece. Will those in the future even understand all that went on and why.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
ED - GREAT POST!

"TIME WOUNDS ALL HEELS!" THAT'S OUR EPITAPH!

PEACE... TOM

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
And you dear friend are leaving great ones! Thank you for this important historical poem ! You are a treasure for AD!

love,
tl

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
All we will leave is death and destruction! But I agree with you totally!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
You walk the path of God...where not many go there these days. I consider you one of the finest Ed, love Holly

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
A profound write my friend...the music enhances the write very much. I wonder if the civilizations of the past ever wondered or pondered their own fate as we do...or if they had peace with mother earth and enjoyed her blessings as well as respected them as well, leaving little room for fears such as we know today due to man-kinds greed and abuse of the land. A thought provoking write indeed, lingers on one's thoughts.....as always well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Ed, I too am enamored with the cultures of
our real Americans. I always visit the sites
etc. and in the west of Wyoming, South Dakota
Montana, Colorado, New Mexico and Arizona etc.
One of the most powerful sites is Devil's Tower
in Wyo. It's awesome. Great informative info,
Thanks my friend.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Ed, if only our such advanced [Sic] society could learn from history. Excellent write.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
did you know we retire 426,000 cell phones every day, use 2 million plastic bottles every 2 minutes! theres more... check out the article and photos at: http://www.theglobalintelligencer.com/dec2007/arts



our trash will tell much about our left behind culture...we won't be leaving mounds, but mountains!

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Sad to know that some cultures have swallowed other cultures. Interesting write. And please check out hiiraan.com, top right of the page...
abdi-Noor

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Ancient wisdom in you, and that you leave, hopefully the new arrivals will be wiser than we were, with them, if, there are any left! Very profound my friend! God Bless You! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Beautifully said, Ed.

"And perhaps, one day in Mother Earth’s not so distant future
Our modern civilization might be called ‘primitive and savage’"

Seems we 'civilized' have conquered and dispensed with the keepers/tenders of this beautiful land and its animals. Now we are in our self-distruct times; but, hopefully, the keepers/tenders will survive and leave better tracks.

Micke




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
yes, we will be known forever by the tracks we leave--perhaps we will learn to step with morse care and purpose

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
You know Ed, I have given this same thought attention, if we go back to just the 50's time was different then to what they are today. Many of the ancient cities have disappeared and been replaced with the fads of today. I love to travel to the deep south and go into some of the small towns and enjoy the feelings of yesteryear. You can still find some of those small towns where people sit around a warm morning in an old country store and they sell there carved wares, hand made fish spinners, quilts, jellies & jams, etc. This satisfies my soul to know in some areas of the world this sort of thing still exists. I love this write, as well as the picture.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Unfortunately we leave tracks in sand.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Your poetry will outlast us all with future space travellers reading it, telling of this planets last gasps...ed

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Excellant and fact filled write that allows the reader to think and then draw their own conclusions on what our future and the planets will be like. Great job.

fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Should you plant a tree on a remote place...that will be the tracks you will be leaving, and the birds will be remembering you every year when they return, until your wood turns to stone and beyond.
Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Ed, you are so dead on right! Mankind has got to wake up, we have the technology to do so much that could be phenomenal.
Wonderful poem with so much to offer and thought provoking also.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Isn't it amazing that we could've learned so much but didn't. Their arcitecture along either created heat or air conditioning from their structures...without electricity. The Etowah Mound in Macon is awesome. It was burning up outside the last time I visisted and inside...it was perfectly cool.These ancestors were closer to the earth than we are today.They knew, instinctively, what worked best for all.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
It is nice to have tracks to trace,, "The history", but when things completely vanish it gives one much to ponder as does your poem.
Thanks for this treasure!
Christine

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Yes we will be known, Ed. This is a great write down the winding road of our time. I wonder the same sometimes and there is no doubt in my mind that our world will come to a halt. But how will it end? With another ice age? Flood? A huge vulcano which's ash will darken the sky for a dekate and wipe out all life?
Whenever it will be, I hope it won't be today, because today is beautiful, just like your work.
Becca~

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Ed,

Have you seen the serpentine mounds in southern Ohio? That is a fascinating place, beautiful from the air...powerfully penned history. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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