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My Old T-Shirts
by Patrice Lauren → (All Poetry by Patrice Lauren)
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When I clean out my closet, what am I parting with?


Like a layer of life
In the winter,
Languidly lounging amongst layers
Of conflagrant insulation.
Wind lashing,
Yet ably warming the shivering self within.

Like a memory
In years gone by,
Melting colors,
Masking the melodramatic mime
Of melancholy materialism.
Time tearing,
Teasing, the twitters, tatters of dorsal terrain.

Like a shielding coat of armor
In the battlefield of fashion,
Proclaiming promise,
Projecting a portraiture of poetry,
Punctuating periods of productive purpose.
Perhaps, peddling provocation for further pondering.

It’s difficult for me to part with my old t-shirts.
There’s too much of me in them.
If I clean out my closet,
Will I lose the memories?
   

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 Reviews of "My Old T-Shirts"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
Clear the old stuff..make room for glorious new scenarios..
wondrous write indeed..

Vesna.)

Reviewed by Samuel Stone
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
cute story and a well written poem...enjoyed the read...
Wishing you well...
Sam

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
I like the way you expressed your sentiments in this poem. In many ways, I can relate. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
You can aleays make some neww memories?
Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Arthur Tugman
Reviewed on July 3, 2006
I love your poetry.
Homeschool

Reviewed on June 14, 2006
IT HAS BEEN A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE WORK.

Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2005
I really like this!

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 10, 2005
You write very well in this one. And, in doing so, you've elevated the T-shirt to a level I've never imagined. Taking your words for it, I suspect that being the gender you are, you've put far more into a little 'ole T-shirt that I ever could! Vive la femme! - Bill (with rusty French)

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
sounds like you had a lot of fun with alliteration on this one! each tshirt holds a memory, no?

gypsie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
Never wear em myself. Lots of alliteration. Original subject.

Ron


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