When I clean out my closet, what am I parting with?
Like a layer of life In the winter, Languidly lounging amongst layers Of conflagrant insulation. Wind lashing, Yet ably warming the shivering self within.
Like a memory In years gone by, Melting colors, Masking the melodramatic mime Of melancholy materialism. Time tearing, Teasing, the twitters, tatters of dorsal terrain.
Like a shielding coat of armor In the battlefield of fashion, Proclaiming promise, Projecting a portraiture of poetry, Punctuating periods of productive purpose. Perhaps, peddling provocation for further pondering.
It’s difficult for me to part with my old t-shirts. There’s too much of me in them. If I clean out my closet, Will I lose the memories?
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Reviews of "My Old T-Shirts"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
Clear the old stuff..make room for glorious new scenarios..
wondrous write indeed..
You write very well in this one. And, in doing so, you've elevated the T-shirt to a level I've never imagined. Taking your words for it, I suspect that being the gender you are, you've put far more into a little 'ole T-shirt that I ever could! Vive la femme! - Bill (with rusty French)
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
sounds like you had a lot of fun with alliteration on this one! each tshirt holds a memory, no?
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
wondrous write indeed..
Vesna.)
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