The Changing Room (poem) by The Gentle Man on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

I know it is a mistake to always order clothes by catalogue. This poem made me change my mind. Will go shopping next week.
Love
S

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Steamy and sizzling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Wow!! enjoyable read indeed!!
Shit its warm in here!!
Ted....you a star!!!

love
Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

gee it's awful hot in here. I like the ending

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Fine erotic work, sir.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Whewwwwwwwwwwww gentleman,
This one is very excellent
PJ

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Nicely done. I'm worried about Ted, however. [smiles]

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

hot stuff! (I don't NEED to be hot today; it's supposed to be 100 degrees here in northcentral texas! Supposed to be hot all weekend before a cool front brings some relief next week! :( ) (((HUGS))) Excellent write, Gentle Man!

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Absolutely great!! With a wife like her, who
needs strip joints! This is how to keep the spice in a marriage! Super job, G-MAN!

Denise

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

This is good, GM! I don't like those changing rooms either! Maybe I should put on a show like Ted! LOL...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Sometimes in public, it is the excitement that is the thrill :) Very hot.

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Now this is a hot orginal write! Wow.

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

... playfully hot.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Breathtaking and wonderfully provocative, as always. The conclusion is simply genial!

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Love and Lust, the perfect partners!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

WOW! It's hooooootttttttt in here! I just love it when matrimony and the evils of life can't stand in the way of erotica between husband and wife. Somehow it reknews those vows everytime it happens. Loved this! ~SH~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

My wife refuses to change in them because she thinks somebody is watching via camera or otherwise, I don't mind if that is the case, I always just for fun, pull it out and shake it at them, so far no takers.