Soft and sensuous, my friend.
EXCELLENT!

Yf, *Linda*

Thank you for sharing this passionate offering, Allen. Love and peace. Regis

Allen,
This is really beautiful poetry, so soft and passionate!

Lovely piece, excellently composed!

Love, Sheila

Wow.. What a romantic refreshing write.. Liquid sensuality. IMPRESSED!!

One word Allen Gorgeous emotive gem!
"Your love is like a gentle sweet rain,


Tender, refreshing and absent of pain.



I long to immerse myself in your liquid pleasure



And drink of your amorous passion forever.



I dream of the day, that you are in my night,



For you and your love will ease my plight.



So allow me this, and lay your body next to mine,



For I wish to drown myself in your liquid pleasure…



One more time."

Lady peg

I gotta go with John Bidwell here, yes, pour me some as well...Short and to the point with the emphasis on the point, very well spoken, Al...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

I usually have such command of the English language, but I'm very tired on Friday nights, so I'll just say I'll pour me some of this.
Much enjoyed.
John

very passionate J...loved this..floria

Ahhhhhh soft and gentle with a touch of fire
so beautiful Allen, a sensuous gem;-)...

gee Allen, this struck me onto one plane when I strarted, ten seemed to shift gears again for me half way through, and now I can see the logic of that, but it took a second, and what logic too ! Great ! I really seldom see love this way, and you are right, the rain that includes no dash of pain, and within too, just great, Al