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Broken Sand And Golden Castles

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Wednesday, September 29, 2004


Broken Sand And Golden Castles


 


I reached out my hand into the approaching night


And plucked the rising moon from the sky with all its shimmering light.


I held it close to my ever groaning heart,


All whilst praying in silence that you and I never part.


I smiled a soft smile, as soft as the light, which I held.


For it were through shadows and ocean swells…


that you appeared quietly unto me.


I watched you as you walked out of the rolling sea.


Your feet were fixed, and standing now on broken sand,


 your eyes calling…calling unto me.


Calling for me to come and take your hand.


For you captured my soul as your eyes wove their spell.


and swaying now was I before your sight,


I gave myself over to your longing but silent plea.


    I glanced at my hand held moonlight


And ever so gentle and with total ease,


I opened my hand and set it free.


Now glories light filled the once darkened sky


And the broken sand beneath your feet turned to crystal


right before my very eyes.


And the sea, the once mighty sea,


With all of its angry swells,


                Had changed into golden castles


Adorned with ringing silver bells.


Now you,


Now I,


Here together,


Forever,


Preordained


to this sweet by and by.


For to hold our love in,


Is a grievous sin,


For It needs to be set free,


So that broken sand


Can become crystal beneath your feet,


And that dark angry ocean swells,


Turn into golden castles,


Adorned with ringing silver bells.


 


J. Allen Wilson © September 29, 2004


 Tybee Island, Georgia


 


 



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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
spectacular!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
fabulous metaphor - image of broken sand / crystal was absolutely stunning. must admit i missed the ocean when it went poof to golden castles, though... :)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
Allen, it is obvious that the Tybee Island’s beautiful sanctuary enables and inspires you to verbally communicate some terrific imagery from your gifted quill, my friend. It’s an excellent well-penned creative composition. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
Yes glorious composition Allen
Love has to be liberated and free to sparkle like a diamond...
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
A golden write - filled with supurb imagery, J. Allen.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
As always, Al, the best comes when you are on your personal island, Tybee...Find peace there, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
Lovely, J. Alluring imagery.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
superb imagery ... the atmosphere and tone to this poem is outstanding!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
Stunning work J. Allen! I'm breathless reading this
sparkling gem of a poem!It 's magnificent!


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