Good,very creative!

J Allen this is mesmerizing poetry! I love the
motif and the way you choreographed it;-)!

I like the images here, rather dark and powerful poem,

Reindeer

i'm not sure what i think of this one, like ed i need to re-read but the flow and form is excellent

This is one I have to re-read and think about, but so far I find it a thoughtful and interesting read, Al...as always keep up the great work...Peace bro', Ed & Rufuz

Very creative write!

I love the title of this poem. It drew me in--the poem kept me reading, more than once. Wonderful write here. Nicely done with a flow of ease.

Allen,
This reads as easily as the flow of that single tear. Breathtaking Allen.

Lisa

Allen, I must agree with Dawn, and I’ll also add this, my friend. This well-crafted piece held me in place throughout! An exceptional well-penned quixotic creation. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.

P.S. If I may also add. I wonder if you could shorten the distance between the end of the poem, to where it meets the top of the review box? It took an extra five minutes to scroll down to reach it… lol. Have an easy day, my friend.

the single, focused image of the title / last line is incredible, Allen, as is this whole poem. Dawn